Critique of dialogue

Critique of Arththi’s dialogue exercise

·         Told from a third person omniscient POV of an argument between siblings

·         Follows the rules of written dialogue relatively well

·         Good dialogue that slowly reveals the plot and character motivations

·         Decent use of nativisation, words like abah, lbu, lah is used appropriately.

·         The tense is sometimes inconsistent. I.e. past and present tense

·         Some weird wordings or descriptions

·         Overall a decent piece of work.