Thursday, December 1, 2011

correction


It was way past dark when the weekly guild meeting had concluded. Jean walked quietly on the tiled roads, his head filled with the discussions and arguments that had occurred in that large bright hall they called the Thompson Merchants Guild.  The streets were now dark and empty, as if the life of the city had been drained with the setting of the sun and the only company for the merchant was the occasional stray cats looking for a meal. The desolate night streets were not without reason; thieves and bandits, the scum of Pyre emerge from their dark holes when the sun sets. His bodyguard, Jarl as always walked quietly behind his employer, his armor gleamed in the moonlight. For such a large and intimidating man, the swordsman could move as quickly and quietly as a cat. Jean passed a look back and saw the swordsman as alert as a wolf on a hunt. Jean smiled to himself, any would be thief or bandit after my purse is in for a quick end. As if they were reading his thoughts, two men emerged from a dark alley in front of him. There were dark, dangerous men dressed in dirty tunics; one of them wore rusty maille under his rags, probably stolen from a corpse that lied in some forgotten battlefield. They were armed with rusty swords and had dirks strapped to their belts. Before Jean could say a word, Jarl had already stepped in front of his master with sword in hand.  

 “The foxes come to the hound's jaws," he said with a fierce grin. He stepped into a middle guard stance with the tip of his longsword pointed at the thieves. Jean had no doubt that the thieves were no match for Jarl’s experience and sheer ferocity in battle. But even Jean knew that it was still dangerous to face multiple enemies in battle. Time to prove that you’re worth your silver, thought Jean.

The thieves were the first to break the silence.  With a yell one of them lunged forward swinging the sword above his head. It was obvious that he had never had formal training in swordsmanship. With a short step forward Jarl thrusted the tip of his longsword through his attacker’s throat with a soft crunch.....